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A(after)D(draft)
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
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I wrote this for fun after hearing of others problems on AD. I'm purely in this for fun and if my words will brighten anothers sun. As we all can see, fun cost sometimes. Like to write, you may have to fight.

Do so write,
onto your site,
this is your right.
But watch for the after draft,
it maybe a slay so shaft.
Words are like birds in flight,
they can cause some to fight.


Words may pierce like knives,
affect others style in lives.
Most are innocent of ill intent,
others are hell sent.
Having a bad day,
pass it right on anothers way.


I refuse to beat up on anyone,
because of my dark sun.
But this is just my way,
not how others might want to fray.
Some are a little touchy at times,
anything might ring their chimes.


No one in this AD community,
has any true immunity.
The disease of fight,
can end up on any site.
We all take our chances,
as the word romances.


I'm in love with the word,
I try very hard not to sword.
But who knows,
what will mash anothers toes.
Everyones words,
don't fly good birds.
Some fly birds of prey,
in what they say.
Even some of mine,
have no shine.


After draft,
do so math,
incoming wrath,
through AD
Path!


G



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 Reviews of "A(after)D(draft)"
Reviewed by Jennave Coz
Reviewed on May 17, 2007
Cute,true,and part of any place where the world speaks...Thank God for individuality...and Thank you,I have learned alot already from reading your works. Thanks for sharing.

Reviewed on June 27, 2004
This was excellent and so wise Grady! Loved what you had to say here!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Joe McCarthy (Reader)
Reviewed on June 27, 2004
Grady, it's true, we are in love with the word. That's what keeps us coming back to AD.

Reviewed on June 26, 2004
I honestly don't understand why people have to fight with strangers. We've never met anyone online, and most probably won't anyway. What's the sense of fighting with strangers.

May Lu a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on June 26, 2004
A truly wise write, Grady.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on June 26, 2004
Heartfelt message filled with muc wisdom Grady!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 26, 2004
Very creative Grady and a sage message!WEll done!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on June 26, 2004
Once again, Grady, your words and thoughts are very wise. Thanks for sharing them with us, and for the heartfelt message.

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on June 26, 2004
hello Grady,

I wanted to stop by and read you again when and while i can sign a comment it may not be long and I too will be drafted.....

I have come to know you and your wonderful uplifting works over this year always a joy to and honor to know you Poet......

Love always lady Peg

My Mystic East account was closed so Myabe I will be next...
Take care and many thanks for allowing Debashish and i too post you on our site....
May the Years ahead bring you much happiness, prosperity and health my dear friend...


XOXOXOXOXOX

The Lady


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