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The Rooms
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
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Education means a lot but it is only a tool. Without a good plan and some guts to back it up, success will not happen.

The door was unlocked,
still he sat in the room half cocked.
His education and talent was great,
but he allowed his fear to dictate.
Fear was holding him back,
and he couldn't seem to stay on track.
He had no nerve and guts,
so he remained in the fear ruts.


Across town in another room,
one of no education and talent bloom.
With his pen in hand writing,
he was determined and fighting.
He knew there was a lot he didn't know,
but he didn't let it stop his show.


Fear and no guts held one inside,
strong determination and attitude aided the others stride.
The rooms are still there,
except one is vacant and clear.
The one that is still occupied,
contains one who is afraid and horrified.
One occupant was educated and afraid,
the other became successful and paid.


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 Reviews of "The Rooms"
Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on September 28, 2004
i still have to opt for the education...along with the guts to succeed. without an education, i'm afraid its still a crap shoot, even with talent

Reviewed on September 28, 2004
Hmmmm...food for thought, perhaps, Grady? Still, a good write; always a joy to read ya!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on September 28, 2004
The world has its share of both educated fools and arrogant illiterates. Neither gets too far. It's the heart of the man that makes him who he is and determines his success.

This poem should be on refrigerators in many homes, Grady.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 28, 2004
Something to chew on!!

Well penned Grady!!

Love Tinka


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