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Direction
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
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Direction pointed,
mind annointed.
Went the wrong way,
now you have to pay.
Tip toeing around,
trying to hold ground.


Stumbling and falling,
God and the devil calling.
Which way to go,
chose the best and grow,
or pick the worst,
quench the wrong thirst.


In a world zipping,
most be tripping.
Pressures arise,
affecting our prize.
The strong continue,
weak tear the menu.


Menu torn,
direction scorn.
Lost in the park,
walk becomes dark.
There's plenty of light,
if we choose right.
Right for us,
not the whole bus.


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 Reviews of "Direction"
Reviewed by Regina Pounds
Reviewed on October 9, 2004
I particularly love the last line, Grady. You're so right!

thanks,
Gina

Reviewed on October 8, 2004
Terrific stuff, Grady! Well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on October 8, 2004
Very profound write.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on October 8, 2004
In a world zipping,
most be tripping.

Oh how true this is, Grady, in our fast fast mad mad modern world.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on October 8, 2004
That last line is impressive Grady, enjoyed the whole poem.

Reviewed by Linda Roman
Reviewed on October 8, 2004
very nice...

Reviewed on October 8, 2004
One has to pay if one goes the wrong way, so Grady, so we should all be more careful of what we do or say to others. Being judgmental with the half truth of what we believe to be is to hurt others.

We should try to make life more pleasant for ourselves as well as others. Clear yourself of what you thought that you had done was wrong, look forward to doing something great instead. Don't dwell in your past. It is not worth the mental aggravation.

Hope you'll find peace in yourself soon.

Sandie May Angel


Reviewed on October 8, 2004
Grady, Thanks for the blow by blow of this mental fight. Great write!!!

...Michael

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on October 8, 2004
a Little though provoking this one Grady!!

Love Tinka


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