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Down Words
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
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Negative words that freeze, tease and hold us down on the ground!


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Down words affect our roll,
sooner or later they take their toll.
Birthed out another mouth foul,
truly worked on us as a child.
Some continue to afflict,
for years causing great conflict.


A father screamed, "stupid boy!"
For years these words destroy.
Products of stupid insensitivity,
aimed at preventing positive activity.
Overcome, adapt improvise,
shed negative words not wise.


Quite a few operate to down,
listen to them you'll hit the ground.
Nothings worse than being stopped,
other than your head being chopped.
Fear of failure will romance,
but it's still best to foward advance.
Don't be held down,
keep positivity abound!


G


 


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 Reviews of "Down Words"
Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on December 21, 2004
Great advice, G, packed with wisdom.
I wish you a wonderful holiday and a blessed new year.
Nordette

Reviewed by P. Michaels (Reader)
Reviewed on December 21, 2004

Put downs do nothing to pick us up do they? Somehow we have make sure our injuries mend and we go on without resorting to the same tactics. It's very hard, for we human beings are a sorry lot aren't we? Grady, you have given us another great message.

L&P,
Patty

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on December 21, 2004
Excellent Grady. Funny how the people who put us down never seem to realize they are doing it, or maybe want to ignore the truth of it. Great thoughts. Blessings to you and may you have Christmas Joy now and always! Cute graphic;-)!

Reviewed by James Daniels
Reviewed on December 21, 2004
How true what down words do, keep sharing, I enjoyed this poem.

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on December 21, 2004
I agree down words do have a way of having the effect you wrote about. We need reminding that we need to watch what we say.

Reviewed on December 21, 2004
i have been there, myself, years later i still feel the pain. i was told i was worthless, i wouldn't amount to anything, or was stupid and retarded. i now know i am not, but the words still sting. powerful write; thanks for sharing!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :( >tears <

Reviewed by Jeff Mason
Reviewed on December 21, 2004
This hits home, G-man. I see too many people who don't realize the long-term effects of harsh words, insensitively spoken. -- Jeff

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on December 21, 2004
Great message. Yes there are words that haunt me but we all have to work towards the positive :-)

Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on December 21, 2004
profound words done with a light touch. very nice

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on December 21, 2004
Powerful in deed....and if you post it twice...even better!!

Smiles!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on December 21, 2004
Yes words are powerful Grady. Good poem. Happy Holidays to you, My Friend and may your new year be special in every way.


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