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I Messed Up
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
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I'm not perfectionist anyway, just another man trying, continuosly defying.


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Today I messed up,
but tomorrow will be dressed up,
mostly because I confessed up.
No high head in the sky,
just another man trying to positively defy.
So what of a blunder,
not going to hit me like thunder.


I have a vision of joy,
that no one blunder can destroy.
Even a whole group,
will not keep me in the coop.
Mess ups are for sure,
moving on positively is the cure.


Who am I kidding,
the devil did his bidding.
Messing up hurt like hell,
I was headed down with flame on tail.
The closer I got to the ground,
the harder I fought to stay abound.


I've crashed before,
so now I surely know the score.
The ground hit me right in the face,
I'm still wearing a trace.
Walking around still hurt,
but refusing to turn to dirt.


Here I stand with the good and the bad,
knowing surely not to drop down sad.
No use being down,
while your heart and soul drown.
The devil can't win,
in the -hit I still grin.


hehe!

G
  


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 Reviews of "I Messed Up"
Reviewed by Pier Tyler
Reviewed on December 30, 2004
We all mess up from time to time. As the saying goes, it is when I'm in my valleys I grow. And like that line in my fave movie, The Matrix, when Trinity tells Neo, "Now get up!"

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on December 30, 2004
Amen Grady! He can only win if we let him! You're too
strong in the Lord,to let that happen! Happy New Year!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on December 30, 2004
A good mess you made with this one......lol!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on December 30, 2004
Well I mess up everyday but then it is always a way to learn I suppose this is another example of your talent.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on December 30, 2004
We all make mistakes Grady, what we learn from them can be so valuable. Enjoyed your poem and I appreciate your consistent determination to have a postitive attitude, it's inspiring to all of us.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on December 30, 2004
Haven't we all at some time or another, you did this with poise I think, Grady, and with a background of humor...as long as you can laugh, especially at yourself, you got the world licked...Peace, Ed & Rufuz


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