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Great God
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
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A little religious fantasy on my mind. Decided to put it in words. For those who don't believe, I understand. For those who do, we at least share hope and faith. Hope and faith is like feeling we can. It's a form of power that carries us on and on to Something in a world that doesn't want to give us nothing.

Great God don't hide,
come and stand by our side.
Physically show,
then again go.
In this age of devastation,
we need a closer relation.


Your mysterious ways,
aren't enough for
these terrible days.
Good people need to know,
that their God will show.
Bad people need to know,
that you can make them go.


Quite a few don't believe,
but your appearence
won't decieve.
I feel your presence near,
but a vision would be so dear.
Just showing the eyes for sure,
would provide this world
a great cure.


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 Reviews of "Great God"
Reviewed by Monette Bebow-Reinhard (Reader)
Reviewed on May 1, 2005
Nicely put - so many think they have to see to believe. I can't 'see' my heart but I can believe it's there just the same because I feel it, the same way I feel my 'God.' Thanks for sharing!
Monette

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on April 24, 2005
Thank you for sharingthis most excellent write Grady!!

love Tinka

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on April 24, 2005
I agree that this is an excellent write and some still wait around for signs but sometimes they miss what is right in front of them.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on April 24, 2005
I agree with Sherry G.!methinks of the scripture where Jesus said "all you want are signs and miracles, you won't get them" His salvation is our miracle and the record of His life and His words still being spoken 2000 years later is the sign. Our faith is up to us. Excellent write, and I sure know how you feel, we all go there at times, just wanting back-up;-)
L&L
Eileen

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on April 24, 2005
I saw Him this morning as the sunlight danced upon the pretty flowers I had just planted. I could feel His warmth in the rays of the sun, welcoming them to their new place to grow and grace my world. There are miracles every minute, we just have to notice them. God appears in everything, if only believers will be able to see this, then so be it. A naysayer would think it was nothing but cheap magic if a miracle were to unfold in front of his/her eyes. When we leave this place, the truth will be known to all...Let those of us who believe give thanks for all that we have been granted and for those who do not believe, let us pray that they will learn to feel and accept His love. Excellent write, Grady, as I always find in your Den.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed on April 24, 2005
Grady,

If we can't turn to Him in times of trouble, how can we trust Him for the good? An excellent, thought providing write. :)

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)

Reviewed on April 24, 2005
wonderful write, grady! very nice! well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your tx. friend, karen lynn. :D

Reviewed by Dave Harm
Reviewed on April 24, 2005
Great write... for those that believe, He (or She) shows himself everyday... by kindness and love from our neighbors and communities... for those that don't believe change won't happen, until all believers never doubt...


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