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Patient Patience
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
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Lying in the hospital,
an assault patient.
He wasn't patient
with his patience.
Assaulted his neighbor,
during an argument.


His patience worn thin,
now the hospital he's in.
His neighbor was patient,
never threw the first punch.
Only reacted to one thrown,
by one grown.


The patient,
now wishes he was more patient.
He realizes patience is a virtue,
one he must learn to nurture.
There was no need to punch.
How's the hospital lunch?


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 Reviews of "Patient Patience"
Reviewed by Dave Harm
Reviewed on May 30, 2005
Our actions at times can throw patience right out the door...

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on May 29, 2005
Another great write from you!!

Being a blue Monday....well....that says it all...ER might get busy!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on May 29, 2005
We are responsible for our actions, and whatever we do, we must bear the consequences of our decisions. Great write, Grady
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Henry Stevens
Reviewed on May 29, 2005
Great wordplay, along with good advice. Nice work. Henry

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on May 29, 2005
Grady you are a whiz with words, excellent poem!

Eileen

Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on May 29, 2005
violence is always silly in retrospect...but at the time...no you are right, it is wrong

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on May 29, 2005
Nice word play.


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