I let lose with a little hate, so I re-wrote the dictate. It was appropriate at the time, later it wasn't worth a dime. Not for what it may have caused, now those feelings are paused. The temperament at the time, influenced hate to sublime. And it did! I couldn't put on a lid. Later on it was capped, the poem was zapped.
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Reviewed by P. Michaels (Reader)
Reviewed on June 6, 2005
Guess those are the poems that we should zap. They don't do anything, but hurt us and everyone else. Stick with love, Grady.
L&P,
Patty
Reviewed by Richard Christopher Suarez (Reader)
Reviewed on June 6, 2005
was the poem really zapped?
I can't believe that'.
Oh yes those big words can be very hard to find....but some to me are very educational...and teach me alot about the english language..so I don't mind to read some but not ALL the time...it makes my brain ache...lol!!
I myself used some of thise bigones in some of my poems and when I re-read it I cannot pronounce them even...lol...but know what they meant to say!! WHAT A JOKE!! But thats me!!
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L&P,
Patty
was the poem really zapped?
I can't believe that'.
good write!
Rich
Nor Have I Ever Looked At Color Of 1's Skin-But,His Personality Is His Mouth----His Character Is Seen On Site_
If Man Woman (Strangers) W/O Smile Sez How Are You-Opens(Hold) Door For Me In Public Place,i.e. NOW THAT'S RESPECT_
It Costs Absolutely NOTHING To Be Polite Or Nice To Anyone Else_
Now I Do Swear A Whole Hell Of A Lot---But (God) Will Never Ask Me WHY,i.e. He (God) Already Knows Why...
TRASK
I myself used some of thise bigones in some of my poems and when I re-read it I cannot pronounce them even...lol...but know what they meant to say!! WHAT A JOKE!! But thats me!!
Love Every word you write anyways!!
Love Tinka