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This Writing World
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
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Just blowing off some steam poetically. Right or wrong doesn't figure in. Actually most of my problems don't involve the den, but the outside world.

Full of jerks,
writing fools that urks.
Want your feelings hurt bad,
just pick up a writing pad.
Start writing,
prepare for the fighting.


Writing is high profile,
no matter what your style.
Good writer,
or bad writer,
better be a strong fighter.
Every "t" better be crossed,
or you'll get tossed.


Watch what you say,
or you'll definitely pay.
Even in perfect form,
watchout for the storm.
Someone will hate,
just in the human trait.


The negative traits rule big,
just the nature of the pig.
This world is full of hate,
this writing world
sure does relate.
The haters really groove,
their critics will hlep
your writing improve.


Can't stand the heat,
don't be raw meat.
Once the pen drops,
cooking never stops.
Join in well done,
you'll have more fun.


G


 


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 Reviews of "This Writing World"
Reviewed on August 21, 2005
This is ToTally freekin' Amazzzing! I love it~! every word G E- I was wondering if your a critic.. my style is different--- I would like some Constructive critism- It's a growth thing-
I want to grow-grow-grow - The only way that can happen is with an experienced seasoned writer--- Can't stand the heat-don't be raw meat etc... Wow....... The simmering of our words fester in her thoughts, that sure holds true- I agree wit ya'- WArm HuGs2U-Peacefully,Sheee

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 16, 2005
Powerfully written Grady!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Chanti Niven
Reviewed on August 16, 2005
Dear Grady,
A great rant and much truth in these words. I've experienced this myself. Words are written, words are read but nobody but you lives in your head. I've learnt to develop duck feathers and to let it all flow off. It helps. LOL
Take care
Chanti

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 15, 2005
Grady it's good to get it out if it helps. There will always be detractors wherever and whatever we do.Don't let them get the best of you...

Eileen

Reviewed by Cynth'ya Reed
Reviewed on August 15, 2005
You just described a few English profs I've encountered. Ready to criticize but defensive when offered correction.

Alas, we write in spite of their bite.
blessin's Brotha G.
cynth'ya

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on August 15, 2005
it all comes with the territory ... just write how you feel that's all that matters ...

Reviewed on August 15, 2005
Grady:



You will have to teach me how to fight. I don't like to fight when write. That's my style. Sometimes I feel like I'm deader than an ant, just minding my own business, but then Boom! Here comes that foot!



Anyway...I'm quite disappointed...feeling like deader than an ant right now...



Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o(

Reviewed by June Thompson (Reader)
Reviewed on August 15, 2005
this is great and so very true here and in the outside world as well

well versed

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on August 15, 2005
I have found very little negative so far, though the ones that did, sure cut me a new a**hole...this one is horizontal rather than verticle...;) Ed


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