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Blaming God
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
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In the Garden of Eden God gave man a choice, we chose to be free. Freedom comes with a price. Don't take this too serious, it's just a poem, or you can take it serious, whatever floats.


Sure at times we seem
to be in a world of crap.
Makes one want to sometime
take a nap.
Wake up to a wonderland,
and a utopia grand.
Far from the maddening crowd,
where we can live more proud.

I don't waste my day blaming God,
in whole or in part.
I do thank him in my own verse,
that things aren't any worse.
They could always be worse,
with nothing but a total devil curse.
God is a loving God regardless,
he could have just split,
and said that's it.

Dumb humans had it made,
in a fine Garden they laid.
But they didn't want this,
so my Godly whatever they can kiss.
Heaven will be their second chance,
to really enjoy lifes romance.
Some won't make it to heaven,
because they sin seven to eleven.
Arrogantly,
like there's no tomorrow,
selfish,
don't care about others sorrow.
The humble loving sinner,
might still be a jackpot winner.


To all you earth men,
it's not the sin that determines in.
You were born into sin,
and you'll die in sin.
It's the choice,
the chosen voice.
Hang and speak with the devil,
you'll continue on his level.
Life will continue in the red,
down in hell instead.

G

  


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 Reviews of "Blaming God"
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on February 4, 2006
Things could always be much worse....but I thank god it aint!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on February 3, 2006
Grady,

We have Free Will. We can choose the Lord's narrow path or follow the flock into the flames of Hell. No other choices. There's no use in blaming God for disasters, illness, or whatall; He is not behind them. We should be screaming at Satan...the thief who comes to steal, kill and destroy (paraphrased, John 10:10).

An excellent, thought provoking write; thank you for your words today, my friend!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Chrissy McVay
Reviewed on February 3, 2006
I know things seem bad, but I was researching a book on the old west, and there were 'horrible' things that happened that I hadn't known took place! The incidents I read of were most vile. Perhaps because we have more people, and the media, the same types of violence appear more horrific and frequent?

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on February 3, 2006
Grady Amen and blessings to you for this fine inspired write!
People have stolen the word choice, to mean abortion! I find that
very sad. There are many ways to use the word choice, most important to humanity it means whether we choose to accept a Creator or not, and what you have said about it is perfect!

Eileen^

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on February 3, 2006
We may be born and die in sin, but it is what we do with the middle of it that determines our fate and our happiness. You are absolutely right with what you say, the choice is ours, for me, I will take the path to heaven, thank you! *S*
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on February 3, 2006
Things could always be worse

They really could, but I sure hope they don't get any worse right now.

Reviewed by Betty Torain (Reader)
Reviewed on February 3, 2006
I love your summary.I can really understand the essence of your poem from my frame of references. Thanks for sharing. Love Betty Torain

Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)
Reviewed on February 3, 2006
I LOVE the line about choice, that is exactly what it is. Lots of wisdom in this, and although we all have lots of pressures, having faith can be the light that shines the way out of sadness and keeps the boat afloat, so to speak. Enjoyed this alot.


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