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a Real down
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
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Some have no real reason to be down...


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If we're whole,
if we're breathing ok,
if we're not sick everyday,
if we got both eyes good,
if we have both legs not wood.
if we have both arms swinging,
our brains not mentally ringing.
if we have a place to live,
if we got extra food too give.
if we live in a peaceful location,
not a warring nation.
if we're basically during alright


!.#$%%^&*()))_+?


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 Reviews of "a Real down"
Reviewed by Laura Mayer (Reader)
Reviewed on January 6, 2007
We really have nothing to complain about if we have all these things eh? Good write, makes one appreciate what we have...But pray for ones that don't. Hugs, Laura

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on January 4, 2007
Brilliant ending...I could understand that...written the same in all languages I guess......lol!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on January 4, 2007
Good! You're back! Now let's keep charging! Love Holly

Reviewed by Michael Mathieu (Reader)
Reviewed on January 4, 2007
We should all be happy to be alive,
and thankful for what we have.
Pray for those less fortunate,indeed.
Thanks for sharing,
Michael


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