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Poetic Cannibal
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
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Some things will gobble us up if we aren't careful, even verse, it can be a curse.


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Poetic cannibal,
you could probably eat
the huge elephants of Hannibal.
Each day you gobble up my time,
hardly anything else will sublime.
Between us it's a love hate affair,
but
we're still a together pair.


Umfa ah umfa ah umfa ah,
that's the sound of my brain,
you're versing me insane.
Umfa ah umfa ah umfa ah,
can't you hear the grind,
all the friction in my mind?


You're the ruling dictator,
I've become the spectator.
Umfa ah umfa ah umfa ah,
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!
I could scream out invasion,
my totality is under your persuasion.
Seems I have no choice,
but
to travel your greedy course.


Umfa ah umfa ah umfa ah,
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh


ahhhhhhhhh what the hell!

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 Reviews of "Poetic Cannibal"
Reviewed by Rosemarie Skaine
Reviewed on January 30, 2007
Love the rhythm!!! Slave driving muse's work is well done, too. R

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on January 29, 2007
Addictive to poetry has its virtues if used in the right way. Great thinking. Victor

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on January 29, 2007
Umfa ah!, Umfa ah!??
sounds like a Kool write Grady
Is that fever for writing we all have
Peace

William

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on January 29, 2007
You cannibal you! You crazy man! Lord, one day your down the next your up..just like me! Love ya! Holly

Reviewed by CJ Heck
Reviewed on January 29, 2007
Ahhh, poetry as a cannibal! Brilliant, my friend! I've heard it described as an addiction, a disease, a friend, a foe ... to poets, it's all those things and even more. It's who we are, I believe, right down to our rhymed, metered, and imaged souls. Well done!
Love,
CJ

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on January 29, 2007
the title got me here, the poem made me smile, i h ave a poetry ghost, some have muses........this is great lolol
loved it

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on January 29, 2007
Oh myyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy......sorry I havent been commenting ,I have been feeling yucky.Starting to feel better..stay safe and well sweet man...Hugsssssssssssssss


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