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Troubleshooting
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
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Some friends and family you can't help..


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Whats wrong Mack?


Everybody wants to attack.


What do you mean?


Maybe it's because you're too mean.


Well maybe so,
I'm always on the go,
anyway how do you know?


Well your facial expressions for one,
your face needs some sun.
You're always frowning,
and everyone you're downing.
You never say anything nice,
you act cold as ice.
You may need to warm,
try to have more charm.


I'll charm alright,
you looking for a fight?


See what I'm talking about,
always traveling that stupid route.


Why you calling me stupid fool?


Look at you,
don't you know how to be cool?
I'm the only friend you got,
even with me your temper is hot.
I give up,
you're too darn corrupt.
See ya later on when you cool down,
I might come back around.


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 Reviews of "Troubleshooting"
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on April 13, 2007
I think I am living with this oerson!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Laura Mayer (Reader)
Reviewed on April 12, 2007
Sometimes you need just a little more patience and understanding with people like that, sometimes it works, somtimes it doesn't!
Great write.
Hugs, Laura

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on April 12, 2007
Excellent write as always..I missed your writing sweet sweet man...Hugssssssssss

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on April 12, 2007
With someones the only thing that help is a mighty kick where the sun don't shine and that someone apparently has his brains posted.
I little more than niiiiiiice.
Georg

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury
Reviewed on April 11, 2007
Excellent poem. Very straight to the point.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on April 11, 2007
good write-makes one check themselves a bit!

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on April 11, 2007
Sometimes even those we love just do not want to be helped. Interesting write!

Be safe,
Karen


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