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Pat on the Back
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
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If you're waiting for others to give you a pat, that's where you might still be at, waiting.


This life has hardly given me a pat,
more or less it's been a smack from a bat,
so I know right where I'm at.
Smack dab in the middle of the sit,
but I never quit.
I keep right on trucking,
in this life worse than a horse bucking.


I've been throwed,
like a grass cutting lawnmower mowed.
Eyes watching,
it never showed.
As a whole I look together with all,
but just like Humpty
I've taken a great fall.
Right off the wall,
I'm still running from the devil,
each day he comes to call.


The only pat on the back I really get,
it's my own hand doing it.
But for now my hand is sore & hurting,
but I can't stop,
because the devil won't quit flirting.
Devine hands slapped my back hard,
each day this is where I get my start.


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 Reviews of "Pat on the Back"
Reviewed on January 18, 2008
AWESOME POEM My friend!
Pat on the back
I even lack
at times the pain
is like a heart attack
but I won't quit
it's a hit or miss
I'll use the chalk board
to keep score!
That is my law! lol
Warmed in the Spirit, Warrior Purple Lady Sweet Sheooxoo

STay Positive!
BTW- Here it comessssssssss, SMACKkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk! Got it - GOOD - and if you were here, I'd give ya' a big HUG!

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on January 16, 2008
sometimes we just have to be our own best friend

Reviewed on January 16, 2008
Excellent write!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :)

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on January 16, 2008
Hey darlin ,I would give you that PAT sweetie anytime...LOL...stay safe and well sweet sweet man....Hugssssss
Love,
Chanti Lace xoxo

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on January 16, 2008
Reaching back to give myself a pat does pull out my shoulder so rarely do I do the self pat...and thats where its at...Ed


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