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Thrill or no Deal
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
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Lets make a deal, or forget a good thrill..

Romeo and Juliet,
all of the rest of you I bet.
I'd lose my money,
if I didn't put it on sweet honey.
We all look for a thrill,
for it many will double deal.

A good thrill does vary,
some of us will even marry.
Put a little love in your heart,
it will brighten up your start.
You'll have sunshine on a cloudy day,
you won't have to wait for the month of may.

God gave us life and free will,
he meant for us to find our own thrill.
We all live in some type submarine,
there we reside as king or queen.
We surface when life is a thrill,
submerge when the devil comes to steal.
But we're always looking to deal.
If we don't make a good deal,
it may affect our thrill.

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 Reviews of "Thrill or no Deal"
Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on March 10, 2008
Outstanding write Grady
was it in blueberry hill I found My thrill
It sure was in 1960, Kisngston, Jamaica
a house of ill repute, and I a young Marine on Port liberty
I didn't have to go, but I wished it so
Peace Brother

William

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on March 9, 2008
i like the totally humn touch of your writing!

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on March 8, 2008
...I see temptations in your pen OnePoetGem...and hear their song in your poetry...and it makes music.
well done...
John


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