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Pot Shots
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
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Some might throw the whole kitchen, and even get to bitching.

Write at your own risk
get ready for the flop and frisk
the incomng pot shots
maybe no review nots
scheming sneaky plots
Prepare to be attacked
from all angles
make plans to remove
the tangles

Plan to be an island
with all the sharks
swimming around
knowing you're
safer on the ground
Still you dive into the
water deep
praying your pen
won't seep
and that your verse
written will keep

By all means don't plan
to be accepted
unless you'er strongly adapted
have no plans of being inepted
Be very careful if
you have thin skin
and by all means remember
you're writing in the den

OnepoetGem

 


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 Reviews of "Pot Shots"
Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on October 15, 2008
Grady, you were the one that never gave up on me...never judged me, never had forsaken me, never doubted me. If you can be all that to a friend, you must be a wonderful husband. Keep writing and being you! love ya! Holly

Reviewed on October 15, 2008
Grady:

You are right! You can't have thin skin when you're a writer. I'm done with the people who love to judge others with their own perception. I am my own person and that is it. If you like me, be my friend, if you don't like me then don't be. You can't please them all anyway!

I'm glad you're still writing!...but don't forget to take some time to be away from the den and go out to have some real fun!!!

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on October 15, 2008
I share the same sentiments as La Bell Rouge.Your work is always a treat to read and look at.Take good care of yourself

Edwin

Reviewed on October 15, 2008
Keep writing Grady, there are many that appreciate you and your poetry. I'm one of them.


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