As I review and write
I see day and night
and then some excite
William Bonilla's humorous
blog did it just right
Even I dwindle between
day and night
wrong and right
and at times I also try
to excite
I get stuck in pain quite a bit
and sometimes can't quit
bigotry and hate
poetic bullchit also relate
Then there's love verse
some I write good
others might be worse
but I always serve my curse
In between
writng and reviewing
at times I get a little lost
in what I'm doing
Just what is my aim
and who's the blame
In the end it's up to
me to tame
or continue on lame
maybe end up in shame
as I play this poetic game
Either way
I'm a poet just the same
In short, this is damn good writing, smooth like well aged bourbon.
Cheers,
Dan
Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines (Reader)
Reviewed on November 4, 2008
Grady, it's a gentle curse, for better or worse, to have to write verse, wordy or terse, comic and perverse, for readers diverse, earning no coin for our purse, 'til we ride in a hearse, but it's sooooooooo much fun :-)
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Cheers,
Dan
Write on, Poet!!!