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System Check
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
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Sometimes we can worry too much about our imperfections.


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Jumped out the bed
it was the middle
of the night
Something was wrong
I didn't feel right
So I made my choice
I had to change my course

I was headed in the
wrong direction
my dreams mirrored
this reflection
So I got down on my knees
and prayed for direction

What the Creator revealed
I try not to keep concealed
It wasn't the direction
I was headed
it was more confidence
that I needed
Confident that I was
more good than bad
For this reason I should be
more happy than sad
Every since then I've
patched azz and been glad

No ones perfect

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 Reviews of "System Check"
Reviewed on January 12, 2009
No one is and we all need to find direction. Good poem Grady.

Reviewed on January 11, 2009
If we could only learn to see ourselves as God does, then we'd be a lot better off! Very well written; bravo, Gem!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)
Reviewed on January 11, 2009
He forgives us..over and over!
Very inspirational write!

Reviewed by Lew Duffey
Reviewed on January 11, 2009
Good one.
God Bless,
Lew

Reviewed on January 11, 2009
Grady,

I like this one, too. Accepting oneself as human, as an imperfect species, and asking the help from the Father, who IS greatness, is the first step. Well done.

((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on January 11, 2009
I like this one Grady...how true, love ya, Holly


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