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Most Do Quit
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
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Sometimes quitting is easier, in some cases, but it will take us no places.

Daddy got the booty
then quit his fatherly duty
Some are born into
then commit suicide
before their life is through
Quite a few start
then quit their part
Lovers suffer quite a few
broken heart

I quit being a son
after dad took off on the run
Mom quit being a wife
after dad ruined her life
Life gets tough
many quit after they've
had enough
Even after we quit
life is still rough

I thought about quitting verse
when things were worse
but I continue to serve my curse
Quitters never win
winners never quit
Lifes a lot better when
we finish it

Whatever

opg

 


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 Reviews of "Most Do Quit"
Reviewed on March 21, 2009

Wonderful and forceful write, and a sad but frank story in perfect verse. I think writers don't quit because they just can't...that makes them win in the end.

Cynthia

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on March 20, 2009
Typical Of Abuse,i.e. I made It Thusfar So Will You Anybody Reads This...Yes, It Will Continue Get Beyond Even Worse...

Etal: Where I Come From Winners Losers Mean Same Thing,i.e.In End It Is Only Your My Reputation That Counts...

TRASK...

Reviewed on March 20, 2009
Excellent could not help but reiterate.
Writer's are born with the words just waiting to escape we all will be summoned by the pen regardless if one tries to get away.

Words can haunt you know 'til you get them out.

All the best,
Gwendolyn


Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on March 19, 2009
Excellent, G...I too am most happy you continued to serve your curse or was that curse who you serve...damn memory or lack thereof...E

Reviewed on March 19, 2009
Never quit, (((my friend))); keep on writing!

(((HUGS))), much love, and continued prayers!~

As always, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :)

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on March 19, 2009
Gem, I'm glad you continue to serve your curse.
We'd miss your verse. -gene.

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on March 19, 2009
Inspirational. Winners don't quit and you're definitely a winner and so is this poem. Liz

Reviewed on March 19, 2009
Your on a roll here, I cant keep up with you, another excellent write
In Christs Love
Michelle~


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