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Fighting the Gloom
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(Life can be better, even in the mental mind.)

As I sat here in my room, fighting my own dark gloom, at times my mind sometimes just wants to go BOOM! I know there are many reasons why I should be down, however I fight the frown. My mind be searching for some light, to help win this gloom fight. I know the easiest thing to do is to give in, and let the gloom win. However, to me allowing yourself to be unhappy is the number one sin. If I had a friend inflicted with the gloom sin, I would advise him to try to fight and defend. So in being my own best friend, I scream inside to myself, fight the gloom my inner soul friend. The end!!!

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Reviewed by Dove (Reader)
Reviewed on April 12, 2003
{{{{{{Grady}}}}} you're on the road to freedoms door

Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader)
Reviewed on April 12, 2003
Even in gloom, we can bounce back. Very good.

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on April 12, 2003
Hey Grady, Excellent write, with a great rhyme.


YF
tony

Reviewed by Brittany Renée
Reviewed on April 12, 2003
This is a tough battle to fight, I have to agree. Written very nicely, Grady! I agree, but I wish I could live what you just preached, but unfortunately I have yet to learn how to control my mind like that ;)

Warm Love
*-Brittany-*

Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle
Reviewed on April 12, 2003
Nicely done Grady. Please sign up for my newsletter. It gives an inner look into my life!
Thanks and keep up the good work.
Jill

Reviewed by Josephine Bohen
Reviewed on April 12, 2003
there are several things i like about this piece 1) that you are your own best friend 2) that you have decided that you can fight this depression and mostly 3) even in the midst of this "Gloom" your energy and satisfaction in life comes forth.
josie


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