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The Repairing Inner Soul
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
  
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(The inner voice speaks for the best.)

Patch me up my outer friend. I got this way because you fail to defend. You allowed the pain of living to pierce your outer armor. I sent you a message of positive glamor, instead of heeding my good message you did stammer. Remember when you had that bad cold? The time you felt so bad your good feelings were on hold. Remember when all your efforts were just to get well and recover. Well you're over that pain now and a good feeling you still want discover. During that time the germ had you. Now the germ has gone on through and still you sit there all blue. What is your major malfunction? get your behind up and enjoy your body's good function. Enjoy every feel good second, minute and hour of the day. Enjoy until we're attacked some other way.

Ok, ok, I got your point. While I'm not sick and feel good I'm going to blow this joint. Out of the house I go to have some fun in the sun.

Wait a minute fool. Do I have to return you to school? Aren't you forgetting something? Get down on your knees and pray to the Lord for your good health. It's the core of our good wealth. Pray that he will help keep you in a good positive mind. And in return to me you will be more kind. Pray for strength when you're down and sick. Don't let luck be your mind pick. If it wasn't for me, your strong inner soul, you would always be in the worst trick, well or sick.

Thanks my deep down soul friend,

I needed that soul mend.


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 Reviews of "The Repairing Inner Soul"
Reviewed on April 12, 2003
Excellent Prose,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on April 12, 2003
Good prose, Grady.

Reviewed by Kacie Rahm
Reviewed on April 12, 2003
This is great, The paragraphs are hard to break apart the lines though, maybe press enter a few times?

Reviewed by Dove (Reader)
Reviewed on April 12, 2003
Yes..! Health is something that is earned through the efforts of our Lord and through us..


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