(Bait placed, in place, waiting for the victim to bite.)
The trap is set
The victim will regret
Being a victim
Survival chances are slim
For her or him
The ulterior motive
Becomes the motive
Unsuspecting innocence
Looses innocence
Gets tangled
Then maybe mangled
In the sex game
Disguised as a love game
A trap just the same
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Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)
Reviewed on June 22, 2003
Does loving someone always mean being caught in a trap? Seems so to me.
Another great one. This is unbelievable. I only miss out one day and find so many new poems in there. How do you do that?
Love
Nico
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on June 21, 2003
Yes can be a trap Grady good expressions.
Lady Peg
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on June 21, 2003
Very witty, creative and true Grady! Bravo...Well Done!!!!
~Nikki~
Reviewed by nevine Al Seidi (Reader)
Reviewed on June 21, 2003
Yes, very true.. to the trap, we are all mice (dying)..I like the simile.
Loses innocence (you have got a typo there).
Nevine
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Another great one. This is unbelievable. I only miss out one day and find so many new poems in there. How do you do that?
Love
Nico
Lady Peg
~Nikki~
Loses innocence (you have got a typo there).
Nevine
Very interesting insight Grady. Very well said! Gave me a good giggle. :)
Thanks,
Teresa