Break Out Of Your Cage (poem) by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper on AuthorsDen

Break Out Of Your Cage
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Or continue to be locked up in your own world.
Break out of your cage So your cage won't break you Free your mind So your mind will be free Open up a whole new world So a whole new world will open up to you Don't limit yourself So yourself won't be limited The bars maybe invisible But they are visible To the mental mind ************ If you don't believe me Go try to converse with someone you hate The mental bars will pop right up Then your mind will get corrupt I tried this and it's as hard as hell I have this older brother that I don't like I called him after quite a few years of dislike I almost brought him to tears Now I've faced my hate fears The next move is up to him I feel better now because I let go of the hate So even if my brother does hesitate He will not be able to dictate That I never tried to relate I stepped outside the cage And let go of my rage (wasn't easy though)

Reviewed by Regina Pounds

Reviewed on June 30, 2003

Good start.

Gina

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)

WOW...WISDOM AND EXCELLANCE SERVED PIPING HOT HERE....BRAVO GRADY!!!!
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Go Grady. Wisdom is knowing you've done all you can and the karma is over. Walk on to your destiny, and leave those behind that can't make the journey. It isn't their time.

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

"Break Out Of Your Cage" is a poem for the golden pages of the twenty-first century Poetry.

"Break Out Of Your Cage" comes with emotions, rhythm, wisdom, and inspiration that warms the heart and the soul.

Praised be the Author of "Break Out Of Your Cage".

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Dove (Reader)

You sock it to em' Grady..Brother, soul is in you..

Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle

Thanks Grady, This is good!
Jill

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

i can relate to this, grady, so well, in fact. i have two older sisters i don't get along with at all; i have tried to make up with them, but the rest is up to them. the ball is in their court. thanks for sharing! (((HUGS))) :(

Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)

I bet it wasn't easy. But you are damned right with it. I am working on this "free your mind".........wise and great words.
Fantastic as usual. I guess I always write the same comments, but I cannot say anything else unless you post a real stupid one .
Love
Nico

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)

Thank you Grady!

Em!