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Avenues
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One way in,
no way out.
Worth thinking about.
The pool is there,
the water appears warm and clear.
Temptations grips you,
the devil pushes you.


So you dive in,
get consumed within.
Now you're all involved,
common sense then evolved.
You might want out,
not liking what its about.


Frustration sets in,
you become agitated,
then you get frustrated,
but you're traped,
with no avenue out.


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 Reviews of "Avenues"
Reviewed on December 29, 2003
Good write, Grady; always enjoy your writes! (((HUGS))) and much love, your Tx. friend, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on December 29, 2003
You know what I'm tempted to say:) This is a bit like a modern day Dante, another one of your wise writes, no messing, just straight to the point, flying true!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on December 29, 2003
Most Interesting So!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on December 29, 2003
Dispair has no equal

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on December 29, 2003
My friend, there's always a way out.
Prayer will open it up to you.
May the angels lift you up and show
you the avenue out.
~Excellent write, my friend.

Peace 'n Love, *Linda*

Reviewed by michael horetsky (Reader)
Reviewed on December 29, 2003
Very well thought out..Life is like a circle..It is how it isw percieved..We make our own chains...michael

Reviewed by Lynn Barry
Reviewed on December 29, 2003
The one way streets...of life...makes you stop and remember that sometimes there really is no turning back...right on!

Reviewed on December 29, 2003
"Avenues" makes me think a lot! You hit that alert siren!
The message is clear: "We live in a cosmological island, in which we must perfect our tools to imrpove our lives."

HEALTHY HAPPY NEW YEAR.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU,
Apprentice-poet by the Grace of The Great Poet.


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