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WayUpHigh
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As writers and poets we can dare go there, this is just my fictional creation.


***********++++++++++++++++**********
Look at those humans down below,
I gave them freedom of mind to grow,
still a lot walk around like they don't know.
If I didn't want them to have freewill,
they would all be attached to strings.
Quite a few see the lines,
but they refuse to read the in between.
The most important not seen.

Adam in the garden,
was alone with no others,
he didn't even have sisters and brothers.
There was no need for rules.
so there were no learning schools.
Adam had no Bible to read,
with no others there was no need.

Expansions of population,
brought on tight relation.
With all the friction of existing,
rules were needed to prevent twisting.
There's no way millions could exist,
without the laws of a strong fist.

The Ten Commandments are in stone,
the rest are stories in the Holy book alone.
There's flexibility,
to use in utility.
Granting the gift of freewill,
also gives some the chance to steal.
Certainly sometimes life isn't a thrill,
then there are those who unnecessarily kill.

I knew human life would be a melee,
this is why I planned a judgement day.
Being a loving God,
don't they understand that I will read the heart?
I am very understanding,
even though I made life very demanding.
I had to make a strong demand,
so humans would make a better stand.
It's for their own good,
the price of functioning in free mode.

G


 

 

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 Reviews of "WayUpHigh"
Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on January 7, 2004
EXCELLENT, EXCELLENT..
One of your best, kind friend.

Love n Peace,
*Linda*

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on January 6, 2004
Strong intelligent write...

Reviewed on January 6, 2004
Grady~

This is absolutely wonderful; a "heavenly" write!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your Tx. friend, Karen Lynn. :D

Love ya, Grady!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on January 6, 2004
Thought-provoking and well expressed. Thank you. Love and peace, Regis.

Reviewed by Lynn Barry
Reviewed on January 6, 2004
This is thoughtfully composed...and lovely...

Reviewed by Sandra Corona
Reviewed on January 6, 2004
This blew me 'WayUpHigh'--cool write :)!
:)Sandy

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on January 6, 2004
Grady this one is beautiful!
Thanks Gem
Love n HUGS
Peg

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
Reviewed on January 6, 2004
You make a pretty good God, Grady. Good God, Grady! I liked your poem.
Best regards,
Leland

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on January 6, 2004
This is wonderful. Very creative work, Grady.
~Chrissie :)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on January 6, 2004
Well penned Grady!!

Thanks for sharing your talent!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on January 6, 2004
Grady my man..this is great...I love the storyline here...we all have free will as that was Gods intention ... He rules over all...We make the decisions...good or bad...and we pay....loved this..The only fiction here is you playing the role of God....good job...floria

Reviewed by Handsum Hart
Reviewed on January 6, 2004
an interesting write, even if only in fiction, the beauty of writing is so wonderful

good work Grady


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