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I-Can'tWin!
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I can't win! thinking this stops you before you begin. I quit thinking this, for years now I've experienced mindful bliss. It's all in the mind, because wealth is still hard to find. But I feel better, not being negativities babysitter. With good thoughts in the head, away goes the mental dread. No physical fortune in name, but fortune just the same. Positive Mind power, can prevent life from turning completely sour. My pockets are empty of gold, but I have a positive attitude keeping me bold. Winning in life is one thing, feeling good in mind gives a special ring. Frustrations become less, clearing the way to pass lifes test. With less stresses, we pass more tests. G

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Reviewed by P. Michaels (Reader)

Reviewed on March 8, 2004

Grady, excellent write, and certainly, we'll win in the end, if we keep the faith. It's right that a positive attitude is worth more than all gold in the world. The faithful poor will inherit the mountain.

Love, Patty

Reviewed by Bonita Quesinberry

Reviewed on March 4, 2004

You got that right, brother! A positive attitude is worth all the gold in the world: makes anything bearable, and only God can do that for us. This is a wonderful write. You might want to change one word: negativities to negativity's ~~BonnieQ

Reviewed by Scott Zachary

Reviewed on March 4, 2004

Sounds like you've got it together. Happiness, peace of mind, and a positive attitude are worth far more than any amount of gold. I have to keep teaching myself that almost on a daily basis. With your attitude, you are a winner. Enjoyed your poem.

Scott

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on March 4, 2004

Thanks for this offering Grady!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on March 4, 2004

Awesome Grady I always feel better after reading you!!

Peg

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