Divinity’s wings brushing
cascading in pure white
down the subtle curve
of a back smooth and fine
Soft as a dove,
with warmth of compassion,
her eyes beckon to me
urging on my confession
On loveless nights mourning
she has stood silently above
gently stroking the soul,
a breathless hush
Tears fall,
oh my tears fall
upon the sublime hands
the caress sympathetic
and the breath of all
shared in my empty bed
since I was a child
she has watched above
now in hot tears I hear her
Hush,
I've always been here.
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Reviews of "Aloft on a Tear"
Reviewed by elois Masters (Reader)
Reviewed on October 8, 2003
Tyler.
What in tarnation are "Divinity's wings"? And: Doves are not soft.
"Her eyes beckon to me," is a romance novel cliche as with all the tears aloft ect. Who ever the narrator of the poem is, I don't believe they've ever been there, where ever there is. It's all a bit vague and disappointing. I'm curious as to what you were trying to achieve with this... this poem.
P.S.
Send the gently stroked soul down the babbling brook because it cuts like a knife.
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What in tarnation are "Divinity's wings"? And: Doves are not soft.
"Her eyes beckon to me," is a romance novel cliche as with all the tears aloft ect. Who ever the narrator of the poem is, I don't believe they've ever been there, where ever there is. It's all a bit vague and disappointing. I'm curious as to what you were trying to achieve with this... this poem.
P.S.
Send the gently stroked soul down the babbling brook because it cuts like a knife.