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He Has Committed Suicide
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Forces of agony shook him horribly
As winds of pain blew from within
He weighed all options possible
But none seemed quite appropriate
He has to dismantle a death trap
Into which poverty had thrown him
Deadline to pay debt is approaching
Much faster than he had anticipated
With a smile he reached out a poison
A sip of a pesticide solved his problem
He has committed suicide

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Reviewed by H. Lena Jones
Reviewed on February 24, 2007
Oh, this is a sad write, my friend. Still, suicide should never be an option. What about Missionaries? Church groups? World Vision? etc? Do not lose hope!

Lena

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
Reviewed on February 24, 2007
You've described a quiet desperation and the devastating feeling that there is absolutely no hope. Your poem is so sad, but that is the point. There is no happy ending for stories such as this.

Reviewed by Jibril Mohamed
Reviewed on February 24, 2007
Desperate indeed! With choas, impoverishment, lawlessness as a result of war, many of our people have lost hope Abdinoor. No option seems to solve any of the problems. This causes hopelessness and suicide. The suicide can take various forms: joining the fighting factions, Killing, robbery, rape, Drowning in the Ocean on the way to Yemen,... etc.

Do not lose hope brother. We are undergoing the Natural selection Process, and I am sure that you will survive because you are one of the fittest.

Thank you brother. I will keep praying for you inshaAllaah.

Abdullahi Sh. Ali AwMohamed
Columbus, Ohio USA

Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on February 24, 2007
so sad...a wasted life...and the saddest part is that so many people find nothing worth living for in this life, when death looks like a relief, what does that say about living.


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