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Is This a Haiku?
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Trying to make a haiku with a story that leaves an ache in the soul

Fled from war
But died in the sea
Bodies washed ashore

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 Reviews of "Is This a Haiku?"
Reviewed on September 21, 2008
WEll,, it grabbed my heart, to know if it is a haiku, I wouldn't know Abdi-Noor- sorry
but this poem is sad and aching!
I felt "HOPE" then "DEATH" and more sadness well up...
WRITE-ON!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Soulful SHEExooo

STay Positive!

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on September 17, 2008
the impact of your words is indeed, intense -- their emotion crawls inside and lingers in residence there -- God bless -- JMW

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on September 16, 2008
And you have succeeded, Abdi, so powerfully.

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on September 15, 2008
This definitely makes my soul ache. You have expressed so much in so few words. Well done.

God bless you. Kathy

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on September 15, 2008
Strong words that leave one with the vision of such an impact...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on September 15, 2008
Oh my,powerful indeed sweet man...be well and always safe ...Hugs

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
Reviewed on September 15, 2008
It is a powerful 'ku, Abdi-Noor.

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on September 15, 2008
Wow, I hope this isn't close to home for you.

~W~

Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on September 15, 2008
What your touching few words have done is open our eyes to this tragedy, Well done. Love, Bonnie

Reviewed on September 15, 2008
Yes: it is. A horrifying one: not the write, itself, but the subject matter: heartbreaking! Well done, (((Abdi-Noor))).

(((HUGS))) love and prayer, Karla.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on September 15, 2008
I think you've accomplished your mission.


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