lately I’ve allowed myself an indulgence
...my eyes close
and I’m there with you
in life first person
walking through the cold
we’re secured by massive mountains
draped in snow
our breath hushed
lest we show too much emotion
you confide in me a joke
and I laugh so hard my sides hurt
until you throw me onto the snow
tickling me through my coat
it feels so good just to touch
where instead of angels
we make love spirals+
What a wonderful poem. You had me there until the last line. I love your work, Sara. Now how do you make love spirals? Obviously I'm out of the loop here. I guess you will just have to explain it to me. We just don't get much snow in Springfield Mo. anymore so I'm at a loss. Thoroughly enjoyed. lol. Let me know about those love spirals. I'm looking for inspiration. Who knows I might get out to Colorado or something and then I would have a chance to make love spirals and wouldn't know how to do it. I'm ashamed of my ignorance here. lol. I guess I could just fake it, but I no longer fake anything in sex. Just the way I am now. hehehehe Liz
This plumb danged beautiful... sweet.... poignant... and unforgettable!
Your heart has taken your fine mind, and won out!
This is my, Poem of The Day, and I thank you for it. - Bill
Ah Sara, there is somthing about the purity and freshness of virgin snow that makes us feel young and alive and yea very sensual and provocative at times as well.
hugs
Fee
Oh, Sara, this is so beautifully imaged and ... dare I say ... c o m f o r t i n g. Secured by the mountains, held in the arms of love? Indeed. Stunning presentation from you today!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on November 23, 2007
Gotta love those love spirals+ . . . That's what I'm talkin' about . . . Delightful wordplay here, Sara . . . Delightful . . .
Be safe,
Karen
Love Tinka
God bless you. Kathy
Regis
Your heart has taken your fine mind, and won out!
This is my, Poem of The Day, and I thank you for it. - Bill
hugs
Fee
always,
randy
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.