twenty questions
that’s the game
crack me open
take a look inside
learn what you can
learn of me
rubbing your hands
all over me
feel me here
feel me there
feel my thoughts
feel my fears
know my smile
show me yours
know my tears
dry them off
know my hopes
share my dreams
taking me where
only you'll find me
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Reviews of "exploratory surgery"
Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)
Reviewed on June 28, 2003
Excellent Write ... Nice to read ..
Reviewed by michael horetsky (Reader)
Reviewed on June 28, 2003
Short quick to the point...Wonderfully written.. Thank you..michael
Oof! On the surface it seems seductive, in exploring internettedly, it seems to cry out into the blue-black ether, asking for completion... Strangely compelling write, Girl! :)
Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)
Reviewed on June 27, 2003
That's quite an offer - bet he will accept it. If he cannot figure out the usual way, he will by cutting you into pieces and exploring part by part.....
Excellent.
Love
Nico
The doctors once told me they wanted to "monitor" me after a surgery. I told them to monitor my brain waves, maybe they could figure out what I was thinking, too!
Could go for relationships, too, don't ya think? Smile good write...
In Spirit,
Bear
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Excellent.
Love
Nico
Could go for relationships, too, don't ya think? Smile good write...
In Spirit,
Bear
super write! clever and imaginative
(((HUGS))) and love,
karla. :)
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