Pure truth of love is always there, no matter the circumstance. As your descriptions compare the 3 other living things, so too this real woman is beautiful, in more ways than one. Nice work.
Gary
Reviewed by Mark Mahoney (Reader)
Reviewed on March 7, 2004
Soft words so well put together, well done...Mark x
Ahhhhhh... "loving you harmonically"... oooo, Sara... it's phrasing like this that makes reading poetry more than
a stop along the way, but rather an experience that lingers... the words are 'willing' but it's a true poet who knows
how to write them so they matter. Lovely, stuff. katy xox.
Gary
Trixie :)
Love Tinka
a stop along the way, but rather an experience that lingers... the words are 'willing' but it's a true poet who knows
how to write them so they matter. Lovely, stuff. katy xox.