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Devotion Eyes
by Lonnie Hicks → (All Poetry by Lonnie Hicks)
   Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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The Eyes That Bind

She fixed me with those large Devotion Eyes
my psyche paralyzed by those liquid lights
which twinkle-flash into me.

They read deep
until I have to reach to see
where inside those eyes have touched me
physically.

She moves toward me
never looking away;
I'm hypnotized and she knows
I'll not be able to move or breathe
until she reaches my inside personal space
inches away
from her juicy mouth,
apple-red
and satiny.

My insides plead
for them to kiss me
but she
does not-
she bites my lip instead-

her breasts sailing into the harbor
that is my arms
abutting my wharf
anchoring;
her nipples spreading
into my slip;
ripples of her slow breathing
rustle from her cotton-candy mouth
dissolving mine;
my tongue now sugar sweet.

Her lips soften,
slide gently into me,
soft tongue to tongue;
the two dancing.

I cannot move.

She inhales and all of my breath is gone.
I exhale across her collar bone
where my mouth dives to the clef between;
rushing down to rounded-mound
and then to her sister one
and nipple taut
she breaths again
and I make it blush-
becoming more erect inside my quivering mouth.

Each time
it is a kiss only;
only a kiss.

Each time
I remember
an instant too late
before it all absorbs me again;
each time consumed after first fixed
by those liquid eyes
and her candy mouth-
I stagger forth from it all
rememberless.

 

 


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 Reviews of "Devotion Eyes"
Reviewed by Paul Judges
Reviewed on June 8, 2010
Very well put together, Lonnie

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on June 7, 2010
Romantically, passionate write well written...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on June 7, 2010
well said

Reviewed by Elisabeth Barstowe
Reviewed on June 7, 2010
Hot!

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on June 7, 2010
Your words flare a fire in the mind!
A wonderful writer, I'll have to read much more of (new here)
Christine


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