Hopelessness is sitting on the roadside
And chewing cola nuts
That stains your teeth.
The beggar without passion
Walking the empty streets at night.
A sparrow at the birdfeed
Picking up scraps of faded dreams.
And the pills that help you last through the night.
Hope is sound and tested.
The unborn that will know life
Never wondering in the cold night to get
Where the time is past and late.
You have captured the title of the poem so well. Wonderful write.
Sandie May Angel :o)
Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on November 19, 2004
I must say I find this piece fascinating. By drawing parallels between “Hope And Hopelessness,” one may be able to find solace in knowing, that there can be a better tomorrow, if one tries to fulfill the quest by sharing compassion and understanding. Thank you for sharing this timeless creation. Take care and be well.
Very poignant and thought provoking poem Peter..the contrast between hope and hoplessness is succinctly described... hope is somethimg that most of us cling onto in the depth of hopelessness!!..best wishes Andrea
Very profound write! Excellent expression "Hope and Hopelessness!" Thanks for sharing this wise message. May the light of hope guide you through your journeys!
Cynthia
Thank you Peter for your thoughtful comments on my poem!
like home!!!
Thanks for sharing.
Wonderful writing......ty, Dani
Thanks for your review, much appreciated.
George
Hank
PS: thank you for your comments on my poem. ;)
Sandie May Angel :o)
Crafted with great thought & penned to perfection - wonderful!!
Best wishes,
Robert
There is always hope with Almighty God...
Peter
As the saying goes "keep hope alive"
Peace and sunshine
Thanks for showing the contrast. It really makes you think...
Keep hope alive!
Pier
Very profound write! Excellent expression "Hope and Hopelessness!" Thanks for sharing this wise message. May the light of hope guide you through your journeys!
Cynthia
Thank you Peter for your thoughtful comments on my poem!
I have learned and enjoyed this poetic-teleological poem.
Thank You for sharing wisdom through Your poetic art.
Healthy Long Life, Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
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