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Commute (Easter)
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Commute (Easter)

Above the freeway -
A spiral of seagulls -
Updrafts teasing smoke-greyed wings.

It is dark here, and dull.
I have had my share of confusion.
It his hard here, there is never enough.

But lupine bloom purple
In the heat of exhaust,
And monkey flowers glow like hope.
A hawk sits on a streetlight
Above concrete,
Searching for burrowing things.

I, too, am hungry
For something whole.

Still, I will rise another day

For the seagulls,
The lupine,
The arc of a rainbow across the interchange.

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 Reviews of "Commute (Easter)"
Reviewed by Jim Dunlap
Reviewed on March 26, 2004
Eddie is very intuitive. The image of the hawk on the streetlight does stand out. I searched in vain for anything in this relating to Easter, so I must assume it just happened to have been written on or near Easter.


Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on March 14, 2004
Truly this speaks to my soul. You have spoken well, Susannah. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by Eddie Thompson
Reviewed on February 15, 2004
i love the image of the hawk on the streetlight....sometimes our search is fruitless...there is always another day....good poem..made me think.

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on October 18, 2003
Excellent...BHUWAN


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