Lush green grasses
of the fidelity
has begun
to grow again
soon the cattle of
love will be grazing
in my heart's pastoral.
Come, my love!
come out from the
shed of my mind
and step into the
mansion of my heart.
Afraid be not, I pray
come to me, come and
mingle with the eternity.
We will make love, the warm
open love like that of the birds
in the garden of our trust.
If ever this modern world needed a love poet along the lines of magnificent - I believe we have found just such a poet in you! Brilliant.
~Rose~
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on May 9, 2004
This is so beautiful, Bhuwan. Lovely poetry, romanticly soft and alluring.
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on May 9, 2004
Bhuwan, I bet you are impatiently waiting the fulfillment of your dream. I bet she will be there for you when you are ready. Why would she resist an overture of pure love? Loved the poem. Your friend Bill.
Just stunning! Mm-mm! Has something of the Biblical "Song of Solomon" about it somehow. All that warm breath and nuzzling, I think! Don't know about sheds and mansions, Bhuwan!? Sounds more like lush long grass, open hedgerows and the joyous rolling around in haystacks to this pastoral English girl! And I've a pair of grey rock doves nesting and cooing in the rose which grows up outside my bedroom window... how will I sleep tonight?! Be-au-ti-ful!! Thank you. Kate xx
Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on May 9, 2004
Salutations Author-Poet Bhuwan Thapaliya
Greetings.
What a BEAUTIFUL longing for the sensual coupling between a woman and a man. Bravo!!!
Come, my love!
come out from the
shed of my mind
and step into the
mansion of my heart.
May the gods fulfill all of your dreams and desires.
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Very romantic.
Thanks for your comments
Stay safe.......
Sara.
love will be grazing
in my heart's pastoral.
Marvelous, Bhuwan!
"like that of the birds
in the garden of our trust." <--- perfect finale.
Hugs,
Tami
~Rose~
Reindeer
Great writing
Andrea
thank you for this one
Tommy
Very beautiful work....thanks for your beautiful review on my poem!!
Thanks for your support!!
Love Tinka
let your heart speak of love!;-)Kudo's!
Greetings.
What a BEAUTIFUL longing for the sensual coupling between a woman and a man. Bravo!!!
Come, my love!
come out from the
shed of my mind
and step into the
mansion of my heart.
May the gods fulfill all of your dreams and desires.
My Deepest Respect and Admiration Poet.
Thomas Lanechanger
Carmen :-)
Moving piece.
Clapping bravo
Love N Peace
Lady Peg
~Chrissie