'My love, raise your head.'
Look, your world is infront of you.
I have come soul miles
away from myself, just to be with you.
Let me put a flower on your head
and whisper the song of love in your ears.
As the drunken bee buzzing around the flower
my heart is rotating around the axis of your love.
I dont have a mind inside my mind
all I have is you , you and only you.
And because of you, I wake up with sunshine
in my eyes and every night, I sleep with
the stars in my eyes.
You have given me everything.
Yet, I long to ask for more
but I find you've nothing to give,
till one night you awoke from your sleep
and pressed your lips upon my lips.
Expressively romantic verse, Bhuwan. Some lovely metaphors here!
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on August 28, 2004
BHUWAN{{{{{{{{{missing you too and babes}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}
This is so so beautiful so tender it is the center of creation.... The love especially in last stanza is exquisite....{{I am well..}} Be in touch.
Bhuwan... Your soul, your quietly flaming passion that comes through in your poetry is such a mesmerizing respite from my restlessness, like a timeless bubble bath... You embue faith, Bhuwan. Steadiness and self respect. I love that about you!
Reviewed by A. Gagné (Reader)
Reviewed on August 28, 2004
"As the drunken bee buzzing around the flower
my heart is rotating..."
Excellent simile and metaphor!
"You have given me everything
Yet, I long to ask for more"
Oh, is that not the reason Plato declared once that love is a grave disease!
And yet it is such a dizzying, irresistible ride for anyone who dares to risk becoming vulnerable!
There is no lack of love in the human nature; only lack of courage.
Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on August 28, 2004
Bhuwan, your extraordinary ability to pen these soothing romantic timeless treasures, which flow effortlessly through the rivers of ones soul, is a testament to your astonishing talent and compassionate being. Thank you for sharing your priceless gift. Take care and be well my friend.
I loved him. At age twelve he touched my heart with his music. At age twenty he captured my heart when our eyes met as he sat on a stage and sang Four months later, he fractured my heart with his refusal to allow us to stay together. At age seventy
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Peace
Reindeer
Vesna :)
very romantic
enjoyed much
William ...peace
This is so so beautiful so tender it is the center of creation.... The love especially in last stanza is exquisite....{{I am well..}} Be in touch.
Love N HUGS Always masterful poet.....
LP
A pleasure to read your work again! Love, Eileen
I promise to wake up my love...I will behave and only hug you...lol!!
Love & Many Hugs Tinka
You have a knack for romance...
Peter
my heart is rotating..."
Excellent simile and metaphor!
"You have given me everything
Yet, I long to ask for more"
Oh, is that not the reason Plato declared once that love is a grave disease!
And yet it is such a dizzying, irresistible ride for anyone who dares to risk becoming vulnerable!
There is no lack of love in the human nature; only lack of courage.
my heart is rotating around the axis of your love.
Wonderful, Bhuwan!
Excellently penned.
Lisa
Beautiful composition of of love and patience.
Extremely well penned... a joy to read.
wram hugs
Elga
This is sooo uplifting and romantic. I love this.
Sandie May Angel