I seem to soar evermore
over the footfalls of the rainbow
embraced with a stellar effulgence
in the itinerary of the sky
fueled by the luminous transparency
of your love that bathes me with joy.
And, “ I love you,” is the only fact
that seems to have survived in my mind.
O, sweet love! I can live without me
but not without you. I shudder at the thought
of living without you. The reality is in my eyes
-both the passion and the fear. Yes, the lamp
of my life is lit not by the dreams but by the
nectar of your love, my beloved. I wasn’t
born immortal but your love turned me into one.
Copyright 2004 Bhuwan Thapaliya.
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Outstanding ! words of passion and love penned with flowing loving nectar. May you keep the love you so rightfully deserve, and may the flame of passion burn forever Bhuwan. Awe inspiring dear friend.
Take care and be well.
warm hugs
Elga
Reviewed by Dana Matthews (Reader)
Reviewed on November 28, 2004
Love is the Eternal Force
of Life and Life Everlasting.
Passionately powerful, Bhuwan. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace to you. Regis
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on November 26, 2004
Incredibly beautiful........
Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on November 26, 2004
Bhuwan, a beautiful declaration, my friend. Outstanding composition.
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on November 25, 2004
Bhuwan,
I love this one I have always loved your poetry and I am so happy I never have to live without it sweet poet friend. You are as Kate said you write in intense passion firey beautiful passion yet leave the soul intack with such a deliverance of peace. HUGS to all the babes. Tell Ram I pray all day. and much love and protection comes from those prayers. Stay strong Bhuwan and let the great I am move he always is there sometimes in our books late but he is always on time in his book L)
HUGS>>>> LOVE >>>> GODMOTHER>>>> SEE YOU AT FOS>>>> HOME.
Debashish send his love, respect and prayers for you all also.
LP
Goodness me, Bhuwan!! Just how do you do it?! You create nerve-searing intensity that causes my insides to burn and yet your gracious and gentle language makes me feel so still and calm at the same time... the visual is also so pure and naked!! You achieve such an impact with your strong and unreserved, fully poured-out expressions of love. You are someone who knows what it is to expend yourself fully - whether it be in body, mind or spirit - and you are unflinching in your commitment. This leaves me speechless - well, you know... almost!! Desperate for news of Ram. Thoughts and prayers soooo much more than you might think by the little I actually get round to writing... but, at least God never gets bogged down with "other issues" - He's always on the case! Good job! There is deity incarnate in you, Bhuwan, in your pure and tender heart and love. TY for this beauty. LOL Kate xx
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Outstanding ! words of passion and love penned with flowing loving nectar. May you keep the love you so rightfully deserve, and may the flame of passion burn forever Bhuwan. Awe inspiring dear friend.
Take care and be well.
warm hugs
Elga
of Life and Life Everlasting.
D a n a
I love this one I have always loved your poetry and I am so happy I never have to live without it sweet poet friend. You are as Kate said you write in intense passion firey beautiful passion yet leave the soul intack with such a deliverance of peace. HUGS to all the babes. Tell Ram I pray all day. and much love and protection comes from those prayers. Stay strong Bhuwan and let the great I am move he always is there sometimes in our books late but he is always on time in his book L)
HUGS>>>> LOVE >>>> GODMOTHER>>>> SEE YOU AT FOS>>>> HOME.
Debashish send his love, respect and prayers for you all also.
LP
Love Tinka
Love and blessings to you and the kids!(Still praying for Ram)