You are the literature of my life. (poem) by Bhuwan Thapaliya on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by M. B. (Reader)

Reviewed on April 5, 2005

Beautiful words!

~ Mari

Reviewed on April 3, 2005

Lucky her to rcve such love
beautiful poem
love and peace

Reviewed on April 1, 2005

I feel this, Bhuwan...I am neither moving nor stationary...so simple a phrase yet so complex in its meaning. Seeing the heavens, feeling the power of the universe within the beloved...excellent! Dena

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on April 1, 2005

Thank you, Bhuwan, for sharing such lovely verse with us here in the den! There is a golden message in these words of yours which the readers can take to heart. Wonderful write indeed!

Sandie May Angel :o)

Reviewed by Henry Lefevre

Reviewed on March 31, 2005

May your love for her last forever.

Hank

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on March 30, 2005

You sure do know how to move a woman to the core of her volcanic being, Bhuwan... who else could conceive of such lines: "Ah! There is a verse, hidden somewhere in your smiles. I am trying to rhyme it with the monologue of my tears... You are the literature of my life...Let me drink those naked verses straight from the womb of your lips..." Swoony! You raise every woman to Goddess-status here. Bless you and thank you... Oh for news!! LOL Kate xx

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on March 29, 2005

A magnificent poetic offering of love, Bhuwan. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on March 29, 2005

Bhuwan,

Yes, quite the poetic masterpiece!! Your quilled pen is filled with an endless supply of excellence!!

Best to you,

Robert

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on March 28, 2005

splendid poem!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on March 28, 2005

Always exceptional poetry from your pen Bhuwan!
Beauty surrounds your mind heart and soul!

Eileen

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on March 28, 2005

Romance spills easily from your pen, heart, and soul. This is a gem.

Reviewed by M.Bennett Hooper (Mikii)

Reviewed on March 28, 2005

Bhuwan, you are a true Master Poet, illustrator of divine love. I am awed. Peace and loves blessings. Mikii

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on March 28, 2005

Splendid poetry Bhuwan!!

Love Tinka The Evil One

Reviewed by L. Figgins

Reviewed on March 28, 2005

Superb poetry! We arn't to compare ourselves to others, but after reading you, Bhuwan, I feel like a willow sapling in the shade of a mighty oak.

Reviewed by Sue Hess

Reviewed on March 28, 2005

bhuwan this is outstanding

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on March 28, 2005

omg!
beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

a keeper!

One of the most, beautiful love poems I have ever read here!!!!!!!
wow

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on March 28, 2005

This is a masterpiece my friend. It should be hanging on the doors of all lovers in the world. your friend Abdi-noor

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on March 28, 2005

Beloved! You aren�t only you.
You are the literature of my life.

A truly magnificent ode to one's Beloved, Bhuwan.