Pale life worry not ! (poem) by Bhuwan Thapaliya on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on April 16, 2005

A superbly crafted metaphorical poetic expression. Thank you, Bhuwan. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by Robin Labenberg

Reviewed on April 14, 2005

This is lovely....great job!

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on April 13, 2005

Bhuwan,

Metaphorically stunning ... exquisite my friend - perfect!!

Best to you,

Robert

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on April 11, 2005

Gasping for breath here, Bhuwan! This is intoxicating and a superb metaphor for passion in extremis. The analogy is unique and perfectly expressed: a genius of thinking to use hot/cold, pale/pink ardour/sorrow in these ways. A complete masterpiece of thinking and execution. A keeper for sure! TY and Bless you, LOL Kate xx

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*� (Reader)

Reviewed on April 11, 2005

Sensuality oozes from this one Bhuwan.

Love & Light,
Joseph

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on April 10, 2005

Breathtakingly sensual!

Peace, Carole

Reviewed by M Flack

Reviewed on April 10, 2005

Powerful and erotic. The imagery is uniquely stunning. As an ode for the passionate love between a man and a woman. Well done.

Reviewed by L. Figgins

Reviewed on April 10, 2005

Stunning stir of the sensual and spiritual. Metaphoric perfection!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on April 10, 2005

Bhuwan you leave me breathless! Kudo's!

Love
Eileen

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on April 10, 2005

Pure excellence Bhuwan!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on April 10, 2005

An outstanding write. This is pure
beauty of verse. Bravo Bhuwan!

Reviewed by Peter Gardner (Reader)

Reviewed on April 10, 2005

Bhuwan, powerful and elegant. I can see the love of your homeland holds you closely. A combination of sadness and wistful intensity. Thank you for the beauty. Peter Gardner

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on April 10, 2005

Outstanding Bhuwan, beautiful poetry from a true master!

Reindeer

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on April 10, 2005

Simply a masterpiece
from a master poet
This is a jewel, a sure keeper
Thanks my friend
you never fail to deliver.

William .....Peace

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on April 10, 2005

Nothing Pale about this poem, my friend!

Reviewed by Antoinette Kopperfield

Reviewed on April 10, 2005

Simply gorgeous with much imagery told in a way that soothes the soul...
Your talent is unmeasurable.
Antoinette