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If You Say ' I Don't Love You'
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If you were never to say me, "I love you."
Then my darling, I would paint the Sun
with the Moon and the Moon with the Sun.
Oh! Then the Moon shall freeze the Sun
and the Sun shall smolder the Moon.
Then no such certainties as the day
and the night would exist.
Beloved, yes, time would die,
if you say, "I don't love you."

Copyright 2008 Bhuwan Thapaliya


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 Reviews of "If You Say ' I Don't Love You'"
Reviewed by Michelle Mead
Reviewed on March 28, 2008
Very romantic and would have all the women swooning!!

Reviewed by john zimmerman
Reviewed on March 26, 2008
Bhuwan,

What a fine fierce passion you evoke here!

good write

john+

Reviewed on March 25, 2008
Bhuwan, eloquently and romantically expressed as always. You are a lover indeed. In gratitude forever for sharing this beautiful piece. Mikii

Reviewed by Donna Quesinberry
Reviewed on March 25, 2008
the Sun shall smolder the Moon

nice to hear that from a man's lips

thanks, ~D.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on March 25, 2008
Deeply emotional and very heartfelt....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on March 25, 2008
Bhuwan,

Could never imagine ever having to live without love. Peace and Blessings Always, Paul.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 25, 2008
Nicely done!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on March 25, 2008
Beautiful!

Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle
Reviewed on March 25, 2008
It is difficult to accept when we love someone who does not return those feelings, whether that love is of the romantic form or through friendly respect from those who ended being "false friends." Time heals wounds, memories fade and as days pass, the sadness from knowing love is not reciprocated eases, somewhat. Still, the memories of what was (in our own minds and only in our own minds) and cannot be will haunt for a lifetime.

Nice poem, Bhuwan. I loved the intertwining of the sun and the moon and their hot and cold nature. Love is like that, too. Wonderful symbolism.

All the best,
Jill


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