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A little smile from your face
May look too little gift to give,
But somewhere a deserted man
Awaits for the smile in your face.
A little unsaid word “ I love you”
May be too little to say
But somewhere for that word
A heart may go astray
A little pat from your hand
May look too little facilitate
But somewhere for that pat
A shoulder waits with rapture
A little kiss from your lips
May be too little for the cheeks
But somewhere for your kiss
A man waits with his rusty lips
Copyright 2003 Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviews of "A little unsaid word “ I love you”"
New Poetry by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Especially the alliterative tripping joyousness of this verse!
May look too little gift to give,
Please send me this QUATRAIN for the Winter, 2003, issue of SONNETTO POESIA, Bhuwan, as I accept quatrains and villanelles, as well as SONNETS.
You are SUCH a splendid poet!
And if you have any other quatrains or sonnets, send them to:
vallance22.gosympatico.ca
NOTE: other authors on AD. Please do not send me unsollicited material. I cannot accept it.
Thanks.
Richard Vallance,
sonneteer and poetry critic,
Ottawa, Ontario,
CANADA
May be too little for the cheeks
But somewhere for your kiss
A man waits with his rusty lips
This is some nice write...and pic tooo
love tinka
Sandie Angel :o)