If you're forever seeking
For your soul mate, who could be
A devotee and a comrade to you
From here to the eternal eternity
If you’re forever seeking
For your dream man, who could be
A heaven and sweet nectar to you
Not only in this life but in next too
If you’re forever seeking
For your lover man, who could be
A trustworthy and frank to you
Not only in front but behind you too
If you’re forever seeking
For your precious man, who could be
A glittering bright star to you
In your unfathomable loves sky
If you’re forever seeking
For your jolly man, who could be
A harbinger of eternal joy to you
In the midst of your severe pain
If you’re forever seeking
For your noble man, who could be
A husband and yet a lover to you
From here to the infinite perpetuity
You have to glance no further,
For I am right here behind your back
Just turn back and give me your smile
Cause I’m the one who loves you
And will love you until I die.
Copyright 2002 Bhuwan Thapaliya
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Reviewed on January 14, 2003
Genuine piece, straight from the heart, k da guys must learn from this. (lol)
Bhuwan TY for this one, you are on the right path, showing - this is the way to win a lady's heart!
Again, beautiful write with matching picture. Wish we could hear your music, too.
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on January 11, 2003
Bhuwan,
Love the pic and a beautiful poem
love and cheers you are always good.
Peggy
Reviewed by Tien Avielle (Reader)
Reviewed on January 11, 2003
you certainly know how to capture female attention - if I wasn't so old .....
(-: Seriously, this is just what most people want to hear, so thanks for the great delivery!
Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J (Reader)
Reviewed on January 11, 2003
Well, well my boy, You have hit the jack pot. Like the Ladies say, better beware :) :)
Thanks for visiting my page and the kind comments.
Love from Coimbatore - Joel -
Reviewed by Michelle Mayo (Reader)
Reviewed on January 11, 2003
How I so wish I were your soul mate. You give me something to look forward too.
Very handsome too!!!!!
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Bhuwan TY for this one, you are on the right path, showing - this is the way to win a lady's heart!
Again, beautiful write with matching picture. Wish we could hear your music, too.
Love the pic and a beautiful poem
love and cheers you are always good.
Peggy
(-: Seriously, this is just what most people want to hear, so thanks for the great delivery!
Thanks for visiting my page and the kind comments.
Love from Coimbatore - Joel -
Very handsome too!!!!!
You tell it like it is...
La Belle's right..
Watch out...
Nice pic also...
Nicole
clever write
john+