I see the divine flower of paradise blooming, when I
Look into the garden of your cherubic eyes and love
Oscillated again in my forlorn sterilized heart, then it
Voted you as my permanent saccharine bride. Soon
Excitement ran with vigor in the corridor of my mind
Yearning for your red ripened lips to welcome, my
Omnipotence love crammed kisses, to accompany
Us to our own Earthly garden of love and eternal joy
Copyright 2003 Bhuwan Thapaliya
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Reviews of "I Love you"
Reviewed by Richard Vallance (Reader)
Reviewed on October 10, 2003
beautiful sentiments here, as usual, Buwan!
Perhaps the verse itself is a little less exalted than some of your other splendid poems.
Love,
Richard Vallance
Reviewed by KAY DEVENISH
Reviewed on February 14, 2003
Loved this beaut poem...great work!
Reviewed by Eroica Mendoza (Reader)
Reviewed on February 13, 2003
very beautiful... must be a really lucky person... :)
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Perhaps the verse itself is a little less exalted than some of your other splendid poems.
Love,
Richard Vallance
Sandie Angel :o)
Buddy Angel
Love and peace,
Susan