Love
Let us swear an oath
And keep it with an equal mind
We will live in the love land
Like the gods and goddess together
We will soar in the sky
Like the serene white doves together
We will swim in the river
Like the free flowing water together
Careless of all mankind’s
And their belief of poisonous nectar
For our love will bloom, ever in our heart
No matter, where we reside together.
beautiful write, bhuwan! and thanks for the nice things you said about america; as an american, you don't know how much that means to me! wish more people felt as you do! love, your american friend, karen lynn. ((((((HUGS)))))) to you, bhuwan! :)
Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on February 22, 2003
A wonderful write!
Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J (Reader)
Reviewed on February 22, 2003
Very nicely done, Bhuwan
Love from Coimbatore - Joel -
Reviewed by Brutal Dreamer (Reader)
Reviewed on February 22, 2003
god of poetry! WOWZA! You're such a poetic man. ;) How long have you been writing poetry?
Your poem is a very good reminder to me of my wife and I. It has truely been my oath to her that has helped us make it through the hard times in this world of mean jealous friends and family members and life period. Great piece my cyber friend.
The Matchmaker:
Angela Calminetti, mother of five, New Age practitioner and gifted psychic and telepath, is proud of her family ties and does everything she can to make sure that all of her younger siblings are as happy in love and marriage
~Shezz
Loved the imagery and romance.
Love n Luck :)
What a beautiful write...
Trixie :)
~E
Love from Coimbatore - Joel -
Enjoy your love..
Thanks for sharing.
Chrissie
this is beyond beautiful......No matter, where we reside together.
Love
Tinka
Especially like--
"For our love will bloom, ever in our heart
No matter, where we reside together."