My heart couldnot repress
An ejaculation of happiness
When I saw her in my dreams
Blanketing me with loves esteem
In the cavalcade of emotions stream
Towards the boulevard of lovers gleam
Beneath the thick crust of ecstasy,
Where swirls the aroma of balmy breeze
And whirls my sadness aloft from the scene
For tonight love has piroutted
Across my ravaged heart
In the stage of my forlorn soul
And massaged my cavernous wound
With the soothing balm of hope
When you lose hope, you lose everything. Well done, Bhuwan. Bravo on a fine work.
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on April 18, 2003
Bhuwan, I love your grasp of, choice and usage of words to form your ideas. Very professionally presented. Your poetry rocks.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Very good! Bill
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Very good! Bill