There are lovers
And there are great lovers
But what separates
Great lovers from the lovers
Is… Their fidelity in them
Even in the midst of infidelity
Their passion for them
Even in the midst of exhaustion
Their dream for them
Even in the midst of delusion
Their compassion for them
Even in the midst of callousness
Their prayers for them
Even in the midst of atheism
And the way, they make the
Unfavorable circumstances
Favorable, for the preservation
And the escalation of their love
By the perpetual bond of non-separation
Neglecting the sardonic social limitations
That intimidates the delicate lovers
But gets dispirited instead in the long run
From the colossal spirit of the great lovers
Best poetic expression of sincere love that I have read.
Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
Reviewed on July 19, 2003
Unrequitted love. Something that seems so "old fashioned"...but B... you smack reality back on the infidels of the world with this. Very smart and wonderful words. This proves that love indeed conquers all.
Truly a master!!! Very well expressed... oh to love like that....
In Spirit,
Bear
Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on July 18, 2003
You are a master
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on July 18, 2003
Great write!
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on July 18, 2003
Bhuwan,
Poet friend this is so truthful done in the mastery that you always present your poetry
excellence.{smiles}
"Favorable, for the preservation
And the escalation of their love
By the perpetual bond of non-separation
Neglecting the sardonic social limitations
That intimidates the delicate lovers
But gets dispirited instead in the long run
From the colossal spirit of the great lovers"
Love n Luck My poet friend.
PJ
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Unrequitted love. Something that seems so "old fashioned"...but B... you smack reality back on the infidels of the world with this. Very smart and wonderful words. This proves that love indeed conquers all.
Thank you,
Emilie
Nancy
Outstanding write Bhuwan.......just outstanding and pure!!
Love
Tinka
~Chrissie
ANOTHER MASTERPIECE
OF YOUR CREATIONS
WILLIAM
In Spirit,
Bear
Poet friend this is so truthful done in the mastery that you always present your poetry
excellence.{smiles}
"Favorable, for the preservation
And the escalation of their love
By the perpetual bond of non-separation
Neglecting the sardonic social limitations
That intimidates the delicate lovers
But gets dispirited instead in the long run
From the colossal spirit of the great lovers"
Love n Luck My poet friend.
PJ