The Love I Had Left Behind (poem) by Bhuwan Thapaliya on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on August 3, 2003

I'm nodding...
Great piece.

Reviewed on July 23, 2003

The love�. I
Had left with you behind
Has moved�. A
Mile ahead in my absence
Yet�. I
Won�t blame you, my love
For�. I�. am
Crucified by my own ill fate
Now�I
Will try to catch the love
That �Has
Flown in my little absence
Towards�The
Domicile of no return
If I. �Succeed
I will forever remain with you
If I. �Don�t succeed
Then I will pray for your bliss
For�. I
Have loved you
More than�I
Have understood you
And�. I
Have understood you
More�. Than
I have loved you

This is my favorite by far.. Brilliantly penned.

Reviewed by Nancy D.

Reviewed on July 23, 2003

Excellent, captivating write.

Nancy

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on July 23, 2003

Really, you amaze me.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on July 23, 2003

Stunning write Bhuwan....You have keen perceptions about all things in life;-)!

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on July 23, 2003

This one is special, deeply touching Bhuwan. you have such wisdom for your years.

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on July 23, 2003

A wonderful piece, Bhuwan. Excellent.
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)

Reviewed on July 23, 2003

((((Bhuwan))))
Oh my this piece is the ULTIMATE MOVING EXPERIENCE VIA POETRY!!!!
Oh my how you have moved and touched me this day, for here you have said exactly what I wanted to say to someone long ago but alas I could never find the words in those moments!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on July 23, 2003

Beautiful piece of writing!

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on July 23, 2003

Lovely write and wonderful expression.

May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight*� Authors & Creations

Reviewed on July 23, 2003

This one hits like thunderbolt, Bhuwan. Striking, is the word... and are the thoughts this poem provokes.

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on July 23, 2003

My friend no truer meaning in words have ever hit home with me on this board. I tell you what, love is very important, but you had better seek to understand your love moreso than love your love. Because if you don't seek to understand, you and your love may not last. And check this out. Even if your love doesn't seek to understand you, you had better seek to understand your love.
What a moving piece of work here. Like I said it hit home with me. take care/ G

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on July 23, 2003

clever write!