Her long dark hair, bounced through the breeze,
Strong galloping legs, pounding to the ridge,
Young trees saluted the ridges, valleys and the hills,
Enriched by the golden sun’s salubrious countenance
The rain, when it poured, quenched not the fire
burning inside her heart, the conflagration of love
For her noble steed, fearless but gentle,
His grace gleamed like the heaven above
He understood her and she him,
whenever they sheltered beneath the tree
or ventured off the track on their whim,
nothing else mattered being together and free.
Her heart felt things that her eyes couldn’t see
and things that her mind couldn’t understood
Her radiant love for him made her heart busy
by then they were each other's prime necessity
To the ultimate question of her curious life
He was the permanent answer
and to the infinite problem of his solitary life
She was the final solution
Their love for each other will forever remain like this
for what's in their mind may escape, but what's in
Their heart will prevail forever, it is written by fire,
forever branded in the shelter of their heart
Their heavenly love distills desire upon their eyes
two mind but a single thought, two heart but
A single beat, they are growing along with age
inside their love crammed charismatic cage
Whatever our souls are made of, theirs are the same
They wished for nothing beyond their smile
and to saunter together, hand in hand
along the sun warmed, love bordered path.
He is free to love her and she is free to love him
this is the story of their heavenly love
and though they may not forever exist
their soul will forever subsist in peace
Sunlight dances through the lovely leaves
silken zephyr swirls the sighing trees
Lying in the green warm grasses of faith
They felt the loves sun above their face
A sweet, tender write, filled with longing. (In this line: "Her heart felt things that her eyes couldn’t saw", you might want to change the word "saw" to "see")
A beautiful write!
Tami
Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on September 11, 2003
So very beautiful my poetic friend....ty, Dani
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on September 11, 2003
This is beautiful and so full of love. Great write.
A sweet, tender write, filled with longing. (In this line: "Her heart felt things that her eyes couldn’t saw", you might want to change the word "saw" to "see")
A beautiful write!
Tami
A real winner!!
Love Tinka