Flowers,
Need Sunlight
For their survival
But, Sun,
Doesn’t need
Flowers,
For its survival
I need you
For my survival
Though, you
Need me not
For your survival
Because, you are
The eternal Sun,
But me, just a daffodil
Flowering on the Earth
Copyright 2003 Bhuwan Thapaliya
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Reviews of "I Need You"
Reviewed by Libby Stone (Reader)
Reviewed on October 30, 2003
Simply put...beautifully written.
Many Blessings,
Libby
Reviewed by Ashraf Goreja (Reader)
Reviewed on October 19, 2003
It is an exceptionally beautiful poem. You write very well indeed.
There is so much expressed in this compact gem - Simply marvelous!
Tami
Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)
Reviewed on October 17, 2003
This seems to apply to many relationships. There is always one part that seems to desperately need the other one to survive. I hope that, next time, I'll be the sun. It is less painful
Nico
Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
Reviewed on October 17, 2003
Ohhhh--I understood this one perfectly! I need love like the air I breathe. You are a master at emotions and want! Soul stuff Bhuwan.
This is first time I read your works and they are impressive and touching. You seem to have very positive view to life. I wish to have the same too but gets shattered easily. wish you Best.
The sun is but one more star twinkling in the infinite. The flowers blooming upon the Earth are what makes it a light of miracles and life, my friend. One more flower of exquisite beauty from your inner Garden, Bhuwan.
~Alexandra~
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Many Blessings,
Libby
Greetings and blessings.
Tami
Nico
Thanks,
Teresa Emilie
jenn.
(as always)
The sheer simplicity of this lovely poem shines through!
I always enjoy your poetry!
Cheers,
Richard Vallance,
Ottawa, Ontario,
Canada
Carmen
Reindeer
*Marlene*
Love Tinka
This is first time I read your works and they are impressive and touching. You seem to have very positive view to life. I wish to have the same too but gets shattered easily. wish you Best.
Bini
~Alexandra~
Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)